Twixt
meandering through this day
like a small creature struggling
through molasses on a smooth
through mollassescounter
through mollasstop
mesomewhere between
meandering &
struggling twixt
the light bulb
and the drain
like a small creature struggling
through molasses on a smooth
through mollassescounter
through mollasstop
mesomewhere between
meandering &
struggling twixt
the light bulb
and the drain
posted by TomScot at 7:46 AM
1 Comments:
"...a small creature struggling through molasses."
Excellent image. If you haven't felt like that, baby you ain't alive! And I love the the universe of this creature. The countertop between the light bulb and the drain. That is where we are, somewhere between the truth and illusion, the light and the abyss. Yes, this poem is one that I believe folks can relate to, and even get a little comfort from. It's comforting knowing that there is someone out there you can relate to.
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